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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12939
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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用户练习作文:

With the development of internet,electronic communication became more and more wudespread.Many people use electroic communication to make friends and take in touch with others.In consequence,people get used to use telephones ,ipdas and computers all the time which lead to human's short-eyesight and cervical spondylosis.What's more,electronic communication can produces estrangement between people.In my mind,face-to face contact are a foundational communication in our life.The electronic communication never could replace the face-to-face contact.We can get along well with others when we have a face-to-face talk.

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