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文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils, pens , notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas. I think we can … As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do something meaningful for our earth
