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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6312
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the developing of our world,we creat great progress in our science and economy.Our life are becoming more and more better,for having convenience traffic,smart phones,omnipotent internet.But our society is becoming more and more indifferent. We do all things for ourselves,we want to get more things even though it maybe hurt others.Someone said that our relationship between humans was changed.We are becoming more and more selfish so that we are always afraid that someone will hurt us.We are selfish,and others are selfish in our mind.i More and more lies only to protect our interests.We keep a good relationship with others superficially and we don't want to trust others except ourselves.And maybe we dare not to trust others. Don't you feel lonely in some special times?You can't find anyone else to talk about your real mind and you can't get any help in your trouble time for you never giving hands to others.So,come on,you need real relationship! You should open your mind and learn how to trust othes.Our society should be warm and kind.Mans in the world should trust each other,we should give more warmth to others.

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