2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My views on Online shopping As the society goes advanced,Internet acts a great important role in people's daily life. They can do most of work they want do,such as shopping,reading,and so on.Shopping online actually has been a fashion. There are many advantages to shopping online .For the first,it saves a lot of time to go to real deparment for chiocing goods.People just need a computer ,and they can buy anything they want at anywhere.Otherwise,shopping online offers more chioces at the same time.Finally,the same product's price is quiet different between online and real deparment.You sometimes can buy something cheeper which can not baught in the shop. Despite these advantages,shopping online also has its problmes.The qualties out of guarantee is the most important problme.And after-sale service is another real problem.