文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;句式变化多样;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
These days the generation gap between children and parents is a serious social problem and my parents and i have the same problem Because they have too much work to do and always busy so they don't have much time to stay with me. So we don't have many same conversation to talk about. I want they take care of me a lot and understand what I need SO i think they have to talk with me more and play with me