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Today in the society have a abnormol phereman ,many parents doing eveything for hers child .This is a bad for everyone on the one hands, parents for his child doing everthing .It is bad for her 'child ,They don't like doing housework ,they dislike cook that little live capable.They alwery thinks parents should doing everything for these