2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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We can often see a group of people who always make decisions uncautiously,when they see someting,they will make a conclusions immediately without deep thoughts.simiraly,when they hear something,them make the same actions. As to my personal viewpiont,it is not wise to do so,as what we do and what we hear may sometimes disguide us.We only accept the grandfloor meaning from direct information.While the deep meaning or the invisable meaning we will neglect.so we cannot get the complete the meaning of one phenomenon.Before we decide how we should do,we must take many factor into consideration,and make the reasonable and complete decisions.As so many people experienced a busy life step, they had no time to think too much when they make choice ,it is unwise to make decions hurriedly.And we hope people should calm down ,lowing their steps to do the complete conclusions.