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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文中从句数量过少;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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It is obvious that the two forces, sexual and racial, intensified the sufferings and oppressions of black women. They endure the double oppressions from white men, even domestically from black men. They even could not get any support from their families and society. So, Walker becomes interested in the suffering of black women and realized the necessity for black women to achieve freedom. As a result, she wrote her famous novel The Color Purple, which expresses the concern of black women, the impact of racism and sexism on them, and their development.

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