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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40882
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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We can often see a group of people who always make decisions incautiously,when they see something,they will make a conclusion immediately without deep thoughts.Similarly,when they hear something,they make the same actions. As to my personal viewpoint,it is not wise to do so,as what we do and what we hear may sometimes dis-guide us.We only accept the grand-floor meaning from direct information.While the deep meaning or the invisible meaning we will neglect.So we cannot get the complete meaning of one phenomenon.Before we decide how we should do,we must take many factors into consideration,and make the reasonable and complete decisions.As so many persons experienced a busy life step,they had no time to think too much when they make choice ,it is unwise to make decisions hurriedly.And we hope people should calm down,diminishing their steps to do the complete conclusions.

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