托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

There is no denying that a large number of blacks were living in the United States with a cracking condition-life and position which made them miserable. Racial segregation was so severe that blacks live in poor condition. Alice Walker also expresses in The Color Purple that racial oppression was the main reason of women’s oppression. Racial oppression was a long-term political issue existing in America. Racial oppression was the power of man who force political system, law system, and official language, customs, education, and the division of labor-determine what part women shall or not shall. In the long process of slavery history, it was full of black women’s tears and blood. Black women suffered most of the abuses came from the man: hard-working, poor conditions, threaten, sexual discrimination and domestic violence. They must be bear it, and did not have any disagreement. But the white enjoyed the higher place of the whole society, and they controlled and dominated the social system. So the white employed their advantage in the social system to assert their power and authority. In turn, the power they seized help them to maintain their rules and government. Then it led to white men’s racial supremacy. The whites possessed the rights that advocated the social, political and cultural dominance by themselves. The power of dominance enabled the white men to control power and to repress and exclude the blacks who succumbed to racial discrimination. Along with the racial discrimination, black women were always kept in the consciousness towards their identity, believing that they were the second-class citizens. In a sense, the black women of United States were deeply affected by racial oppression. The slavery had already rooted in women’s life and idea deeply. Occupying such a position, they should take up arms against the sexist and racist oppression. Thus, Walker expresses her love for black people and resentment to racism, and struggled against the oppression from the whites’ society. Politically, black men in The Color Purple enjoyed equal rights as the whites and even racial segregation were carried on widely in America. We can see that the black women were treated worst everywhere, and they were treated as the second-class citizens: less-respected, fewer jobs, less of everything. Unlike other white women, black women took care of their masters’ children, washed clothes and cooked; accordingly the black women could not be escaped from the whites controlled and oppressed. In this novel, the story took place in the early twentieth century, where slavery still existed in the South. Even many black women lived poor communities, physical, mental and sexual abuse still exist, and the black women still living in the oppressed of male civilization. At the beginning, racial oppression to black women can be seen through control Celie’s body and mind by her stepfather, “She ugly... you can do everything just like you want to and she ain’t gonna make feed it or clothe it”(Alice Walker, 1982, 9). Celie’s life was fully controlled by racial oppression, which directly determined Celie’s destiny and pulled her into a deep miserable life. “I don’t fight, I stay where I’m told. But I’m alive.”(Alice Walker, 1982, 19) Celie’s interior word gave us a vivid description of her attitude towards abuse from social oppression. In society where dominated by the white people, racist oppression was the discourse control and social discrimination.