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Sexual oppression is focused on the sexual and gender politics of the struggle to confine women to the private domain. It is clear that men were able to control women through use of physical and sexual violence at home or to control women in public places. It is through use of violence that men most clearly oppressed women in general. The Color Purple depicts such pictures: Celie was an “invisible woman”. She was imprisoned, alienated and sexually abused. Celie’s tormented came from her husband and her stepfather, as victim of sexual violence in a sadistic master-slave relationship. When Celie was only 14 years old, she was raped by his stepfather. She was so good-natured even her stepfather had to admit that: “she good with…never heard her say a hard word to nary one of them” (Alice Walker, 1982, 12). After Celie had given birth to two children, her stepfather turned his eyes to Nettle, Celie’s sister, and wanted to get rid of her. She became a kind of marketable product which shifted from one to another. He planed to give her to Albert who was a widower with four children and Celie didn’t have any feelings for him. When introducing Celie to Albert, her father said: “She ugly. He says. But she ain’t no stranger to hard work. And she clean. And God done fixed hen You can do everything just like you want to and she ain’t gonna make you feed it or clothe it” (Alice Walker, 1982, 5) Under the sexual domination of her stepfather, Celie did not have her own choice, her marriage and her husband without any sympathy. Simultaneously, the sexual oppression continued to Celie and even worse. She was oppressed by her husband, exploited as laborer in his field, as worker in domestic household, as sexual servant on his bed. As Celie said, “He never ask me nothing about myself. He clam on top of me and fuck and fuck, even when my head bandaged.”(Alice Walker, 1982, 27) For her husband, Celie was a servant, and the only use of Celie was to do all kinds of housework and to take care of his four children. The only one use of Celie was to convenience of his sexual desires and showed him superiority and power. Sexual was not the only suffer that Celie had to bear. Celie had to bear physical and sexual violence. “He beat me today cause he say I winked at a boy in church”(Alice Walker, 1982, 3) Furthermore, just like she was treated by her stepfather, she was always beating by her husband. “He beat me like he beat the children. Cept he don’t never hardly beat them. He say, Celie, git the belt. The children be outside the room peeking the cracks”, “Some time beat me anyhow, whether I do what he say or not” (Alice Walker, 1982, 56) He showed no respected and concerned to Celie, not mentioning love. He even brought his former lover Shug back home and slept with her without asking Celie’s feelings. More than ever, she was often maltreatment and tortured by her husband. Her husband bitterly ridicules her, “You ugly. You skinny. You shape funny. You too scared to open your mouth to people” (Alice Walker, 1982, 36) When Celie revolted him, he laughed and said, “Who you think you is? You can’t curse nobody. Look at you. You black, you pore, you ugly, you a woman. Goddam, he say, you nothing at all.” (Alice Walker, 1982, 176) In her husband’s eyes, Celie was “nothing at all”. His humiliation toward Celie reflected his sexual ideology toward her. Celie’s experienced of sexual oppression was just like being “caged in”. The cage was sexism, and it was forced by men to women. Physically, sexually and verbally tortured by her stepfather and husband, Celie was denied a status as subject. Celie suffered the sexual oppression in her earlier life was a big influence on her psychological fragmentation and shortcoming her self-awareness. As Celie wrote in her letters to God, “ He never had a kind word to say to me. Just say you gonna do what you mammy wouldn’t ”(Alice Walker, 1982, 2) Celie’s self-consciousness was aroused gradually, and she realized her oppression and decided to fight back. So racism, sexism and colonialism were combined enemies to black women. Alice Walker also expresses in The color Purple that sexism especially in the family and outsider in the social was the main cause of black women’s oppression. Therefore, it’s time to call on black women’s to fight against racism, sexism and colonialism for liberty, equality and independence, because women’s unity was important for all of regions black women.