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Put all eggs in one basket may provide us convienet and we do not need to consider select another package to store them,which just like someone deal with problem in their daily life.As a result, if the basket broke,all eggs will out of the basket and crack on the ground.Similarily,we often pay the price if we just focus on one thing instead of considering its' outcome. Indeed,thing should be consider carefully.From one thing,some buyers purchase stock,either just care about the current tendency or only invest one of them.However,the stock market often affected by a variety of situations,which leads clients require some affluent considerations.From another,the treatment of one thing often lack of consideration,this will leads a sense of disappointment if we failure.So,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.