文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Nowadays,while studying English,there is a great number of students do not pay attention to the English spelling. As far as I am concerned,the reason why this problem appears is that now students do not take the high place in English.To be frank,many students just take English course as a study task,and we just study for getting good grade,but not for learning language. In order to change this situation,I think we should take some measures.On the one hand, everyone need to pay more attention in English by spelling and speaking because English becomes a important role nowadays.On the other hand,the school and the teachers would like to set up some activities to cultivate students' interest.Only in this way,can we change the situation and improve the English level of the chinese students.