托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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At that time,Catherine is a traditional girl and have a beautiful illusion for pure love.Catherine is a tough lady,but the death of her fiance has a imponderable influence on her.The death of her fiance almost destroys her dream. At the first stage of their love,Henry is not fling himself into the relationship,but to kill time and gain extra advantage unfairly. Henry even has no idea in Catherine and just regards this as a recreation which totally different from Catherine.She immediately perceives Henry’s cynical attitude to love: We can say that Catherine is clever and talent,she has a clear cognition about Henry’s thoughts and changes his mind to the reality,little by little,he falls in love with Catherine and gains the pure love,to some degree,because of Catherine,both of them can get the love and she is the tutor for Henry.He recalled : “My life was once full.” He told Catherine: “If you leave me now,I have nothing in the world.”(Hemingway,Ernest,1929:127) Thus it can be proved the importance of Catherine. Catherine is also more mature than Henry,before his operation,Henry asks Catherine to be on duty that night so that they may again make love,not realizing the seriousness of the surgery or of this postoperative station.Nor is he aware of the danger in enlisting in the Italian army just because he happens to be in Rome when Italy enters the War.He also insists that he will not talk under the anesthetic.Catherine replies,