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i would like to introduce you my hometown- leshan to you!it's a city with a long history. so there you can see a lot of places of interest. of course leshan is most famous for its giant buddha which is the biggest and highest buddha in the world. it was built by the master in tang dynasty. i have been there many times and i recommond it to you not only because its status in the world, but also the delicious food which will catch your appetite for a long time.and also this is the most impotant reason i think leshan is a great city.you can have the nice food almost every corner in leshan.first i will provide you the malatang, which is extremely hot and spicy but really charming. when your tongue touches it, your will be thankful to me as i give you such a good suggestion. then you can go to the old park near the dadu river to buy the tianpi duck for your relatives and friends, which is really a speciality in leshan, so you can't miss it. after that, you can go to montain emei, a city belonged to leshan. in emei, you can amuse yourself by the world-top scenery. and may be shocked by the naughty monkeys. but don't be afraid, they are sometimes friendly to you if you have some snacks in your bags.
