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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
评语:

文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;能够使用一些简单的从句,但需注意一些句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

It is very clearly that computer is become more and more important ,today ,our life is cannot leave computer,because it had become a part of our colorful life. The use of Internet bring our life a convient,we can use it to look some messages,we can use it to watch movie,we can use it to communcation......although it has many advantages ,many people zlso asked :"whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact",about it`s question ,i provided my answer.i think it is not be replaced ,because communnication face-to-face is the same important as electronic communication .There are some advantages .such as ,increase feelings with parents or friends 、improve your communication skills 、and so on. In short ,Internet are a lot of advantages,there is no doute that if we can`t use computer,we will have less convient .

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