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2001年专四作文真题:Travel broadens the mind

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:18浏览次数:5986
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Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Travel Broadens the Mind
You are to write in threeparts: 
In the first part, state clearlywhat your view is.
In the second part, support yourview with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what youhave written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks.
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句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文中拼写错误稍多,作者词汇量偏小;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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Travel has become more and more popular as the inprovement of our life quality. we are busy to do our Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.

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