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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(36):Top Meal of the Day

发布时间:2013-07-26 16:41浏览次数:777
要求:
最近的一项研究表明,石家庄大约有50%的青少年没有吃早餐的习惯。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇题为“Top Meal of the Day”的短文刊登在21st Century。(100单词)
原因
晚上学习太晚,不吃早餐可多睡一会儿。家长太忙,给钱让孩子自己解决。女孩子为保持苗条常不吃早 餐。
结果
课堂上整天想睡觉。注意力下降,考试成绩不理想。
建议
早餐不可少,提供全天所需能量的30%,且有助于活跃人的思维……
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Top Meal of the Day A recent study shows that nearly 50 percent of the school kids in Shijiazhuang do not have breakfast. They tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests. Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them . In addition, a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast. In fact, the morning meal plays an important part. It can provide 20 percent of the whole day’s energy. For a creative mind and better judgment, school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast.

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