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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Put all eggs in one basket may provide us convenience and we do not need to consider select another package to store them,which just like someone deal with problem in their life.As a result, if the basket broke,all eggs will out of the basket and crack on the ground.Similarily,we may pay the price if just focus on one thing instead of considering its' outcome. Indeed,things should consider carefully.From one thing,some buyers purchase stock,either just care about the current tendency or only invest one of them.However,the stock market often affected by a variety of situations,which leads clients require full considerations.From another,the treatment of one thing often lack of consideration,which will leads a sense of disappointment when we fail.So,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.

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