作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Simple as "life" this word is, it is thought-provoking. Life should have been marvelous, but people always waste time doing boring things. As for me, I am crazy about calligraphy. In the learning process, I will build up my personality and purify my soul. It plays a surprisingly vital role in my daily life. In the short journey of life, how we make better use of life to make it more meaningful? I take myself for example. In the beginning, I will clear my goal so that I spare no efforts to achieve it. As an illustration, I will limit time to read a book. Moreover, accumulating money to travel is to make people motivated. As a saying goes, one of travelling and reading must be on the way. Finally, the more volunteer activities you take part in, the more sense of achievement you will possess. Helping others not only makes others escape from trouble, but also maximizes our own value of life.