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My teacher,Miss Maybelle,is a lady girl with sparkling smile. Every day she attend our class punctually,being fully prepared.First,she has interest and enthusiasm in teaching,speaking in a loud and clear way.Second,she really knows how to motivate us in the class,using all kinds of inspiring words and expressions.The third,she is patient in answering questions from students.Besides,she treat us like a friend who pay attention to coversations among us.I think she is the best teacher I ever met.