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I has a very fat dog,Dudu,who is 9-year old now.Dudu is so clever that every time I come back from school he will nitice it and greet me with his hands on my shoulders. For the food,he likes meat the best.However,biscuits are his favorite too.After I finishe my homework,I will take him out for a walk which is the best activity between Dudu and I.