文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It's unwise that getting a conclusion as soon as you see or hear something.Frequently,we finally find thing was not what we imagined before. First of all, no one can prove what we see by our eyes and hear by our ears is actual,real and true.Did someone tell a lie? After all,we need take responsibility to ourselves.It's necessarily we observe clearly before making a important decision.
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