文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It's unwise that getting a conclusion as soon as you see or hear something.Frequently,we finally find that things was not what we imagined before. First of all, no one can prove what we see by our eyes and hear by our ears is actual,real and true.Did someone tell a lie? After all,we need take responsibility to ourselves.It's necessary we observe clearly before making a important decision.
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