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When it comes to the topic that what is the most meaningful life ,every one has its own interpretation,which give rise to a heated discussion among the public.As far as I am concerned,the defination of a meaningful life varys from person to person. A meaningful life just means that you achieve social value and gain happiness and experience from the daily life.For example,as for teachers,a meaningful life may means to spread the advanced knowledge to their students ,helping them equip with ability to solve the forhcoming problems in social lives.As for a governmentor ,to serive the public a stable and comfortable city is the most meaningful for the reason that they can abtain great happiness as a people's servant.
