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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
In my day,I usually took about the results of the problems with him.Then he told me that the anwser with simply way.He always tried his best to help me.He is very helpful,friendly and outgoing.And he is interested in everything.He often travels with his friends over the vacation.Then he often sent me some beautiful postcards.So,I decided to give a special gift for him.Thanks him for helping me.Best wishes for him.
