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Information has become an important weapon for enterprise development these days because of globalization of information. When students don’t have much information for jobs or part-time jobs, those agencies will try to serve them by providing jobs info and providing human recourse for companies. However, there is no existing industry specification.in part-time jobs agencies means most of them still have low credibility and the part-time agencies market is chaotic, the management is a little bit hard to control and standardize. Through questionnaires, interviews and practical experience and other methods to Fujian Jiangxia College as the main subject of investigation for the development of part-time college students in Fujian Jiangxia College agency investigation and analysis and then to one of the most typical part-time college students intermediary "gregarious" in case analysis, combined with Fuzhou university City 6 part-time college students have a study intermediaries, combined with a part-time college students in the form of a chart showing the problems in agency management. Finally, make recommendations for the management of college students part-time intermediaries exist.