作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It is well known that is no wise when you listen and see what ,you make decision at once.Today ,with economy growth quickly and new means of communication ,the news and information become more and more circulation.People fail to distinguish real or misleading them. people have to keep clear mind ,if you pick up the wrong news,you may have a loss. In information age,whatever you listen or even find about something,you must thought of it.Besides, everything often is caused by complex reason,not only can you find and others talk you about. As a university,we have learn to two thought when make choose. The best way to make a valuable decision is how to analyse the phenonman of you know and you receive.
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