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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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seeing is not believe In normal life, we meet a lot of thing so that we feel seeing is believeing, actually it is not tatally right. as we know, whatever happened ,people are customed to think badly. it is the important factor to creat a bad fancy.for example, if an old man lying in a road of traffic line, amost no people want to uphold hid and give him a hand, because of people's different imagine, some people will be think this is a lair story in order to get money by the methoed,another people might not care the matter that bankrupt their earn plan, at the time, if anyone in this crowed say, i know the old man,he is not a good man, he has a serious marry and his son is hate him. others may be believe it more . and make sure the old man is dangous.by this we can see the lairs strange is powerful even make people get trouble in terror and anxiety. vise and verse, we can see the old man is a poor man and he need help and we can do this! we can make him better ,just contribute to our loving and sympath, and the world wil become better. all in all, seeing or heraing is not totally believeing, giving is getting is really right,and we just do ourselves and help people who need we do.

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