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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Hi all, please noted that the automer traviol will be hold for the new class in grade 1.According to the shcedule , the touring will include visit the botanical garden and see show in morning and tours the summer palace in afternoon, and at school gate around 7:00 on 27th December.if you want to attend this action, please enter your name at students organization by coming Thursday.please pay more attation that the lunch should prepared by you self. and you call leave your baggage in the left and please be on time if you join this active.
