句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
My name is Mingming, I am 7 years old, I love small annimal. There is a dog in my familiy, it is my good friend. Its name is Dudu, it is white and yellow colors and is fat, it is 9 years old, it like to eat fish, egg. I love it very much.