小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My name is Mingming, I am 7 years old, I love small animal. There is a dog in my family, it is my good friend. Its name is Dudu, it is white and yellow colors and is fat, it is 9 years old, it like to eat fish, egg. I love it very much.