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My best friend is Li Lei.He is a good boy.At fast,he like to help with others.He is a outgoing boy.He has widely hobies.Nest,he study is very well.He always help for me to study.I like him.I want to buy a notebook to thanks for him.I hope him very a long time together. Finally,I thanks for you help.