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Top Meal of the Day Rencently a survey shows almost 50% of students go to school without having breakfast. This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First,the students always study too late,they can sleep more if they don't have breakfast.Sencond,many students' parents are too busy to make breakfast,so they often give money to their children.Third,a lot of girls do not have breakfast because they want to lose weight. It must be realized that students probably reduce attention at class,or test record is unsatisfying. Here are some suggestions for handling:having breakfast every day.This can provide 30% energy a day.