2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写方面要认真；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowdays,more and more people have their own computers.Their time abslutly be taken by those machines.Now,we just talk about the two sides about computers towards us. Look,we can see the good for us .Computers make us contact with others more convenient.But, on the other hand, the computer also take us too much time.