2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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The most intereting place in my hometown There are many interesting places in my hometown.And if my foreign friend visit my hometown,I would like to take him to the place that I think the most interesting--the wen tower.The tower I refer is a ancient building.It's said that it has been more than 1,000 years since it had been built.And here are the reasons why I think the tower is the most interesting place.Firstly,the Wen tower has many sculptures carved on it,such as birds,roosters,and other interesting animals.Secondly,it is a little lean but very solid.And last but not least,in some way,it can express our Chinese culture,so I think he will be interested in it.