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It's not clever to make a conclusion immediately just when you saw or heard some thing.Everyone konws it.However wo can not do as it. Firstly,there are thousands of leaves in the world.so as the person.All of us is diffrent from others.something unappropiate to you is not the same as others.so you should beleive in yourself.And do not say the same word to make a conclusion.
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