2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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Recently，the haze weather has happened to many cities in the north of China.The haze weather is badly for our healthy.So that we don't walk out because it's badly for our healthy.In my opinion we are try to walk instead of driving.We should always to shut down windows.In this world,we should effort to together. I hope to try mine best to improvent the air environment.