小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.He always help for me.I thanks for him. He studies very well.So that,he often helps to others.He is an outgoing boy.He helps for me while I have terrible.I very like him.He is my best friend in our class. I hope him have a good time every day.