2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beatiful place If my foreign friend is going to my hometown,I will take he to visit Great Wall,because it is a interest place. For China,Great Wall is a history place. To visit it,you can fell China is a 伟大的民族。and I very like Great Wall,because think it is a 象征