2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

Computer never failed to fascinate people since it was born.what convenience it brings make man hardly to put it down. Different with it's original calculator function,it is now partly to used in learning,partly to our daily life.and even Buying on line has been gradually became a part of life,partly to relex.computer's quickly and efficient application brings us to the Internet century.however,every thing has it's another side.as a normal citizen,intenet provide large number of news,release man's personal imformation as well.we are In a half-glass state.which makes people worrier much. As I'm concerned,computer it'advantage is more than disdvantage,what I want to learn,I can gain from it.of course,I reduce to use it as much as I can,for it will do harm for my eyes.