学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As the old English proverb goes, it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. This is also regarded as a great physiological view of one’s life value. Everyone has his own properties and capabilities, but not all of them can lead a successful life without being aware of difficulties and risks that may happen sporadically. Nowadays, money is known as the most valuable treasure of mankind because it has numerous effect. Men cannot live to find someone who is most fit for you and really like you than someone who didn’t like you at all. In fact, there are many excellent girls in the world from which you can choose to fit you best, not only one. In summary, our life is rich and delightful, but we should hold the capability to make room for its risks and accidents. A decision is preferable to be made in a considerate and comprehensive way when facing with people or dealing with matters and affairs. Moreover, we should be all the way ready to cope with accidents and emergencies, that is, to hope for the test but prepare for the worst.