文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;运用了丰富的复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she very shy,before know her,I thought I never with the shy girl be friend. I always went he be open ,don't be shy, but she never change,I think i can change her,i never thought she changed me,that is interesting. but now we just chat on line ,we live different cite, in the new year we met in our hometown,she don not have change.