【题目要求】
Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.【题目分析】
不同意比较好写一些。Entire是一个过于绝对的修饰词。雇用人员的原则是:The employees should be able to create more than they are paid. 但是,The business also has responsibility to support those old employees, especially when they have contributed a lot to the business.拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
Thddd he decision to hire an employee for life is a serious commitment on the part of both parties. For the employee, such an arrangement means lifetime job security. From the perspective of an employer, however, the deal is not so sweet. Guaranteed lifetime employment, or tenure, at a company, can promote bad work habits, prevent innovation, and lead to potentially disastrous personnel problems. When a workers' employment is contingent upon their job performance, they will tend to work diligently. On the other hand, if workers know that no matter how hard they work, they will receive the same amount of money and have no chance of being fired, there are no incentives for them to work. For people to be model workers they need compelling reasons to work hard and produce work of the highest quality. A tenure-system promotes laziness, inefficiency and low-quality work because it fails to offer incentives for good work, and fails to offer compelling deterrents against bad work. Secondly, companies that offer lifetime positions