单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;注意文中个别的句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a good friend,she very shy,before know her,I thought I never with the shy girl be friend. I always went he be open ,don't be shy, but she never change,I think i can change her,i never thought she changed me,that is interested.But now we just chat on line, we live in different city, in the new year we met in our hometown, she don not have change.