单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;熟练使用了一些长难句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I thought I never with the shy girl be friend. I always want to her be open ,don't be shy, but she never change. I think i can change her,i never thought she changed me,that is interesting. But now we just chat on line, we live in different city, in the new year we met in our hometown, she don not have change.