单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I have never thought make friends with shy girls . I hope she should be optimistic,don't be shy, but she never change. I think i can change her,i never thought she changed me,that is interesting. But now we just chat on line, we live in different city, in the new year we meet in our hometown, she don not have change.