单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I never thing make friends with shy girls . I hope she should be optimistic,don't be shy, but she never changes. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. But now we just chat on line, we live in different city, in the new year we meet in our hometown, she don not have change.