单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;注意文中个别的句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I never thinking i will make friends with the shy girls, I hope she should be optimistic,don not be shy, but she never changes. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. But now we just chat on line, we live in different city, in the spring festival we meet in our hometown, she don not have change.