运用了丰富的复杂句;请作者增加词汇丰富度;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,she is very shy,before i know her,I thinking i never with the shy girls make friends, I hope she should be optimistic,don not be shy, but she never changes. I think i can change her,i never thought she have change me,that is interesting. We just chat on line, we live in different citys, we meet in our hometown at the spring festival, she don not have change.